Holidays

This morning , wrote five basic sentences about are holiday. We looked at the a range of different connectives that will improve our writing-A connective is a word that joins simple sentences, e.g. such as , never the less , in sprite of , but etc. Next, we spent time improving , out 5 basic sentences by using connectives.

How many connectives do you use a day?

Next step for me is to try level four connectives like despite and whilst.

 Holidays

My dog Nala is having 8 puppies but two died so now we have two girls and four boys.I went to Nana and Grandads because I had to have a day off of wood work. When I woke up my sister told me my little brother caleb was getting his teeth pulled out.Also I played online on my Xbox 360 as well as playing with my friends.For most of the holidays I did the wood such as getting the in wood shed,  putting in next to the door , taking it inside to the boxes and then doing it all from the start.