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Thursday, 10 August 2017

My person



Theme: Life is full of fantastic little things
A person who is important to  me

Writing : I am learning to write a piece of prose-  a sketch with detailed words, about a particular PERSON , that is very important to me
I know I have achieved this when I can describe this sketch of this person,in specific detail. To do this I need to:
  • Use specific nouns
  • Activate the nouns with strong verbs
My friend Elijah
Young, with brown and green eyes, those that blink regularly
He has a small nose and a big head with long shaggy hair that has a golden tinge.
His yellow teeth (like -REALLY  yellow) - illuminate the inside of his mouth. He also has freckles that look like they're popping out of nowhere.
His mouth and tongue are odd because his tongue covers half of the inside of his mouth and his lips look a bit bigger then they should be for his size.
He is funny, much better than a clown who attempts to do great jokes.
My friend enjoys trying new things,
My brother from another mother runs fast , so hard, that it can be tricky to keep up with him at times
can do things that I can’t do…

My special friend Elijah